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REBELLION

by TheGodfather 

Posted: 18 September 2004
Word Count: 121


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I feel uneasy at that cigarette,
the one that man smoked and tossed
into the bushes by the bus stop
I sit at.
The sign $1,000 FINE FOR LITTERING
records a time past when men
cared for the law and
nature and other men.
My mind drifts onto a cloud of thought
I think I have always wanted to sit on.
The idea grabs me, and my emotions
see the cup of cola in my hand.
Hurling it to the ground in front
of the man, the rebellion
thrills my blood and thrusts my foot
to the ground
to put out my cup.
Shockingly, he doesn’t understand,
probably because he didn’t put out
his flame that he flicked
into the bushes.






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roovacrag at 11:21 on 19 September 2004  Report this post
Goddy a truly good poem here.
Rules are made to me broken and by tossing aside the cigarette along with the cola cup.

He doesn't realise that not only could he set fire to the bushes but is a litter lout as well.

You portrayed this very well.

xx Alice

joanie at 10:50 on 20 September 2004  Report this post
No, 'they' don't understand, do 'they'? What a good idea, though! I always wish I had the courage to say to a litter-dropper, "Excuse me, I think you dropped this." ....but I daren't.

I like 'my emotions see..' - like your emotions are taking over and you are just prepared to go along.

'the rebellion thrills my blood' - yes, I bet it does!

I liked it.

joanie


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