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by Dipston 

Posted: 16 September 2004
Word Count: 134
Summary: this is a goodbye not writen before a suicide atempt

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Live for Today
Or just wait till tomorrow
Why live tomorrow
When I feel the pain of the world

The strong they shall move On
And we will feel the pain in the world

We call out for Help
Our pain terns to words
Our words into air
Our Word Stay Unheard

Now I am gone, please don’t be angry, don’t be sad
This is my choice one I couldn’t help but make

Our lives we live strong
Our lives we live weak
I lived my life to the full, I hope you can see that
Live for Today

Now I say goodbye & a sorry to go with it

Please follow my wish and be your best have the best and enjoy the best.
Again Live for today, there may be no Tomorrow

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Kaydee at 08:55 on 17 September 2004  Report this post
Hi Dipston. Welcome to WW. Tragically powerful is the phrase that springs to mind when reading this piece. The frustration of the third stanza as the cry for help goes unheard is particularly poignant.

roovacrag at 21:47 on 18 September 2004  Report this post
2 tt's in written and attempt.
Third stanza..is it tern or turn?

Enjoyed the poem,full of frustration.
Third stanza said it all.

The F word has a lot to say but put correctly.

Well done.
Welcome to WW

xx Alice

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