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Solitude

by mamma.africa 

Posted: 16 September 2004
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Question: What is worse than an empty bed?

Answer: An empty bed with a solitary soul.






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nudgy at 11:25 on 16 September 2004  Report this post
Very thought provoking Mam.

Dave x
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joanie at 18:16 on 16 September 2004  Report this post
Very true!
joanie
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Account Closed at 16:04 on 17 September 2004  Report this post
Well, I said I liked minimalism in poetry, but ... this feels like the start of a longer piece. Maybe you'd like to try such a thing?

Steve
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roovacrag at 21:29 on 18 September 2004  Report this post
Mamma, an empty bed is a soul alone.

xx Alice
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nudgy at 10:40 on 20 September 2004  Report this post
An empty bed is also a place you can snore to your heart's content.

Dave
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Account Closed at 10:43 on 20 September 2004  Report this post
Off-topic, I know, but one hesitates to propose other noises that can be freely emitted in such a situation ...
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laurafraser at 07:41 on 21 September 2004  Report this post
nicely put

laura.
ps dave you make me chuckle
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nudgy at 12:27 on 21 September 2004  Report this post
Thanks Laura, I like to spread a smile. x
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