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SUBWAY

by TheGodfather 

Posted: 12 September 2004
Word Count: 208
Summary: There is art all around us. We create it whether we like it or not, good or bad.


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For hours every day
He just sits there
Watching people join him,
Watching people leave him.
The bench he sits on
Is in the center
With poles on either side.
Subway after subway train
People sit and join
Then leave him there.
Sketch pad in hand
He traverses their faces,
Each a perfect picture,
Life is in them.
Everyone is a picture.
Everyone is a story.
He draws page after page
Sketches face after face
Capturing them in time.
The subway purrs on
Then releases its breath.
People join him again.
Turning, he faces the
Bald man sitting down
He drafts the man’s face.
It’s so unique.
His eyebrows thoughtfully wrinkled
Another story to draw.
“What’re you thinking about?”
He asks the man.
“Why do you ask?”
“I was just wondering.”
The artist's tilted head
And his furrowed brow
Wonder at the man's
Cold, closed, calloused response.

The doors gasp again
People stand to leave.
The bald man stands
And faces the artist.
He coldly pulls the trigger.
The artist calmly slumps
Accepting of his fate.
He can do nothing.

For years he’s drawn
Asked people their stories.

It wasn’t very loud
Putting the gun away
He exits the train
Leaving amidst the throng
Another picture in time.






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poemsgalore at 17:38 on 12 September 2004  Report this post
A very surprising ending, quite a shock really, but a very powerful poem nontheless.

roovacrag at 21:56 on 12 September 2004  Report this post
GODDY,
Another picture,
another time.
Are we real
or just sublime.
does anyone care?
if we live or die.

Hey, I liked this one.
Yes life under a subway,not real, not fun.
Just another way of life.

xx Alice



LONGJON at 01:07 on 08 October 2004  Report this post
I've just read Subway (and Waiting for Gordo) today - you paint carefully formed pictures with words, in a sense almost dispassionate pieces. But then, on re-reading, the passion is there, it is just that it is reflective and consequential, it demands no recognition for itself.

Much enjoyed

John P.

TheGodfather at 06:47 on 08 October 2004  Report this post
Thanks everyone for reading. I'm glad you all had 'fun' with this little scene. I actually tried to limit myself to 4 words or less each line. I think I went 5 once or twice. I'm peculiar like that.

TheGodfather


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