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BUTTERFLY KISS

by roovacrag 

Posted: 06 September 2004
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Where would I be if you hadn't been beside me?
following a dream I couldn't see,
holding my outstretched hand to touch you
carressing a cheek that flutters my heart through.

Tasting a tear thats gone astray
like a butterfly kiss just a brief touch,
didn't think I asked for much
only knew you cared.






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Ticonderoga at 14:24 on 09 September 2004  Report this post
A lovely little vignette; very tender and true.

Best,

Mike
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roovacrag at 21:34 on 09 September 2004  Report this post
Mike many thanks for your comments.
I think a butterfly kiss never happens now.
Too full on with a passions that lasts 5 minutes.
xxxxx Alice
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TheGodfather at 05:36 on 11 September 2004  Report this post
Alice,

I do enjoy your poems. They are crafted and wordsmithed. I think I more enjoy poems with concrete lanuauage and images. This is strong though.

TheGodfather
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Lawrenco at 23:33 on 13 September 2004  Report this post
Carries a lot of feeling of of finding that special ingrediant that somehow fuses us and makes stronger.Really enjoyed it.
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gard at 16:21 on 19 September 2004  Report this post
HI Roova

lovely little love poem as usual

didn't quite get


carressing a cheek that flutters my heart through


just a mere point though.


G
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roovacrag at 19:56 on 19 September 2004  Report this post
Goddy,Lawrenco,Gard. many thanks for comments.

xx Alice
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