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Forgotten Me
Posted: 03 June 2003
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I had forgotten until today
who I am
I had forgotten
tucked away
in dark corners
hidden I cowered
Another me outside
smiling at the sun
laughing at the rain
I had forgotten until today
how to cry.
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 Stacey at 17:39 on 04 June 2003
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Rosalind, this is beautiful. Crying is so important in letting out all of those hidden emotions, and this poem makes this so clear. Thank you for sharing it with us, and for sending shivers down my spine!
Stacey.
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 olebut at 18:07 on 04 June 2003
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Rosalind
very nice sentiment but isn't it funny how different people have diferent perception had I written a poem about forgetting an emotion it would probably about how we had forgotten how to smile . still variety a sthey say is the spice of life
tahnk you for sharing with us take care David
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roger at 13:03 on 21 August 2003
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Hi Ros,
Lovely poem that I hadn't seen before....it came up on the 'random selection' thing. But we haven't forgotten you. Where are you?
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Rosalind at 13:17 on 21 August 2003
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I'm still knocking around. I'm seriously lacking in inspiration and motivation to write though. I think its come with being happier.
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roger at 13:22 on 21 August 2003
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Well bloody well cheer down then! Seriously, glad you're happier, but sorry it's screwed your insp & mot - why not pop in and make a few comments (there's a thing called 'string knickers' that I've heard is very good), that might get the juices flowing....well, you never know. Otherwise, if you're happy, write happy stuff. You're good Ros, so don't lose it. Hey, who am I to shout at you like this but....well...er...okay, I'm going.
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