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Healing 31.8.04

by Lawrenco 

Posted: 31 August 2004
Word Count: 170
Summary: I suppose this poem is the here and now.How you actually react to situations. What goes through ones head.This is 31st August 2004. I dedicate this poem to poet musician Morrissey,for helping me understand that I am Smith(me and a few million others).


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The gateway of love opens.
Meteorite mettalled smith crafted swirled monuments ,
Part.
Statement of your asteem and ours.
Not quite dead yet in this place of still.
New life etheric atoms;groving, exciting,ariving.

The look of glum continues on my cat`s face.
Star gazing?I`ll try healing,it may be amazing.
She purrs and plays ,but miaaws distressingly.
I stroke trying to heal respectfully.

Broken hip,yipes,from your dog fight.
Could cost me a fortune at the vets.
Oh I didn`t renew the insurance.
Oh I`m unemployed just at the moment.

My faith renew,I pray away,for a miracle,
to make her well,to keep away ,the vets financial tally.
Incense I might need for this,
I pray to our lady;namaste!

To the father and the son and my own sweet way.
Or whatever your way whoever you`ll be.

I`ll give you a progress report later.
Better put it on my schedule hey!

N.B Cat back to normal psychotic self 20.00 31.8.04.
(kitten actually).Sorted employment for next Monday.
Going to renew Insurance for kitten,miracle;who knows?






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miffle at 22:46 on 31 August 2004  Report this post
Liked this Patrick especially the idea of praying to 'my own sweet way' (think I'll give that a try) and the 'glum' cat happily returned to psychotic: sounds like mine! Lasts long beyond kittenhood... Enjoy! Love Nikki



Lawrenco at 22:52 on 31 August 2004  Report this post
Thanks Nikki, Happy you liked it.

roovacrag at 03:57 on 01 September 2004  Report this post
Patrick,very well written and I loved the reference to the glum cat. Third stanza was so true. Who won the cat or the dog?

Well done.

xx Alice

Lawrenco at 08:39 on 01 September 2004  Report this post
Well infact ,it was the two minature poddles Fifi,Lulu next door.
I thought they were a couple of bohemian Parisians expounding the virtues of existentialism;instead though they want to just eat Cat;I think that Sparky(Cat) came of worse this time.
Our neighbours have kindly put up a extension on their fence,so hopefully it will stop a similar occurance happening again.
It does make the place look a little like Stalag 19.


gard at 16:24 on 19 September 2004  Report this post
HI Lawrenco

I just adore this piece especially since I love cats (I have three). I think its one of my favourites from you (other than the other one which I like this one more).

It has an interesting flow which seems to stop up blunt in some parts and in others flows continually.

Also its so real,

lovely work here

G


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