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THIGHS AND SUSPENDERS
Posted: 25 August 2004
Word Count: 48
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Crossing the road,wind is high
blows the skirt up showing a thigh
men look,smile,even whistle
makes their day if I smile a little.
Might be the suspenders that get them going
turn around thong a showing
Too much flesh?too much faith
shows I can still go the pace.
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 roger at 08:57 on 26 August 2004
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LOL!!!! Well, Alice, you sure know how to attract attention (from us blokes) with a title, don't you! Love the poem, and you keep 'going the pace', girl, cus once you stop, life ends!
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Chem at 11:33 on 26 August 2004
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I really do like your attitude and your poems even more so! You make both seem so effortlessly easy to come by!!
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 kennyp at 12:59 on 26 August 2004
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Roocacrag
I have to concur with Roger about the title it certainly grabs a guys attention! Well it did me anyway. Funny succient and well written.
Kenny
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Chem at 13:05 on 26 August 2004
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I would like to add that it also grabs a girl's attention too :-)
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Lawrenco at 17:02 on 26 August 2004
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More Cheek ,than capers -well were only human!similar as before ,but certainly can`t get enough of it.A good laugh well done.
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olebut at 18:03 on 26 August 2004
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for some reason i couldn't comment earlier, this vision will always be of Marilyn Monroe standing over the hot air duct.
but you know hwo to grab our attention, humorous and needless to say full of imagery
take care
david
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roovacrag at 19:33 on 26 August 2004
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Thanks to you all. I aim to please.
David no one can beat marilyn on this.
Many thanks for comments.
xx Alice
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poemsgalore at 13:12 on 28 August 2004
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Nice one, conjures up an amusing picture and I enjoyed reading it. Made me think of Betty Boo cartoon - boo boopy doo!
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TheGodfather at 01:35 on 31 August 2004
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Roovecrag,
Woo Hoo! A spicy meatball. What a difference a well-chosen title makes in poetry, short story too. Gave me a sorority Catholic school girl picture or something like that. Thanks.
TheGodfather
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roovacrag at 13:56 on 31 August 2004
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Godfather,men like women in stockings and suspenders.
Sexy,and 100%female.
Funny how all but one comment was from males.
Glad to think you're all red blooded.
Enjoy poetry and sensual,though most are fiction writers that commented lol.
xx Alice
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Jumbo at 23:52 on 06 September 2004
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Alice,
As with the others, got sucked right in by the title!
And great words to go with it! Wonderful stuff!
Made me smile! Thanks.
jumbo
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roovacrag at 07:45 on 07 September 2004
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Jumbo many thanks for your comments. Will not repeat what my son said when he read it.
xxx Alice
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