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The starry eye.

by Sue 

Posted: 25 August 2004
Word Count: 216
Summary: For the attention of Anna, Group expert Beginners. This was an exercise she set. I have "expanded" my original attempt. Sue

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Oh this star is a nuisance. Everytime the sun comes out I'm screwed shut because I am being blinded and then she gets a headache. A man shone a light into me today, he nearly blinded me, I was jumping around trying to get out of the way and he called it a "cateract" or something. She looked in the mirror before, something was dripped into me, and I could see myself. She was quite surprised to see it, it looks very pretty. Shame to get rid of it.

Another man with something in his hand, looked sharp. Where did it go? Ow! what was that going in me, I can't move now.

There's a sheet over my twin now and I can see into a dark room. Another man's coming with something. That's a nice blue light! What's this man doing? There's a lot of pushing, pulling and wet stuff. I'm glad he put that thing in me now! Oh, it's gone dark again.

Here's that man again, I can see him out of my twin. Wow! isn't everything clear! The colours look bright now after all those years of being washed out. Watch those steps, no its okay now, I can see just one image not three. No more scrambled messages to the brain!

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