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CAVITY OF LIFE

by roovacrag 

Posted: 20 August 2004
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What did you see beyond the cavity of life?
the eyes are like the gateway to the soul,
did you dream of a love unknown?
or was it a life when seeds were sown.

Are you expecting a flower to bloom?
the minute you met,oh so soon,
take care to nurture and reap,
before the blossoms die and weep.






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The Walrus at 08:05 on 21 August 2004  Report this post
Not sure what this is about Stan, 'beyond the cavity of life' - is life a hole? Please enlighten me!!!

Red
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roovacrag at 20:34 on 21 August 2004  Report this post
Red
cavity can also mean a hollow place.
Where you place your eyes to the soul.
Unseeing yet a life beyond.

xx Alice
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The Walrus at 19:04 on 24 August 2004  Report this post
Thank you for the explanation Alice, I can't pretend to understand it but clearly it's a very strong image for you and the poem remains a powerful piece regardless of people's interpretations/understanding.

Red
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