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As you weep

by Bobo 

Posted: 19 August 2004
Word Count: 33
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Feet faltering
at the edge
of something
deep.

Sleep
alluding eyes
so needing restful
peace.

Heartbeats
in random
time,
never mine to keep.

Warmth
of love
and longing
grapple fiercely
as you weep.






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itcametomeinadream at 13:03 on 19 August 2004  Report this post
Hi Bobo.

This piece has a very nice and crisp 'complete' feel, although I confess I'm not sure if I understood it ;)

Andy
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Bobo at 13:32 on 19 August 2004  Report this post
Hi there Andy - it's about the paradoxical nature of love and the fear of losing that love...

BoBo x
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olebut at 16:03 on 19 August 2004  Report this post
BoBo I thought a very sad and melancholic poem in fact I thought when I first read it i had images of a lost love but due to death and the ability only to experience that love in memories.

up to your usual high standard

take care

david x
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roovacrag at 14:13 on 20 August 2004  Report this post
Bobo, sad poem and full of emotion.
To love and lost is hard to bare.

To love and nearly lose is worth a fight to get it back.

Take care.

XX Alice
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The Walrus at 07:56 on 21 August 2004  Report this post
Hmmm, interesting read - surely being in love should be a place void of fear?

Thought provoking Bobo.

The Walrus
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