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The Quiet Symphony

by Rai15 

Posted: 14 August 2004
Word Count: 38


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I see a piano
in a white void
a black baby grand
made by love
built for happiness.
I see you playing
though you never learnt,
playing a sweet rondo
just for me
in a silent white void.






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Nell at 08:34 on 15 August 2004  Report this post
Rai, a beautifully surreal piece with the underlying metaphor hovering tantalizingly in the air, just like the music in the poem. Delicious.

Nell.

roovacrag at 16:15 on 15 August 2004  Report this post
Rai, beautifull piece. Nothing more romantic than music,reaches the heart and the soul.

Well done.

xx Alice

Jumbo at 19:27 on 15 August 2004  Report this post
Nice one, Rai.

A beautiful image - could almost here the piano as I read.

All the best

jumbo

olebut at 13:53 on 16 August 2004  Report this post
Rai

if music be the food of love play on

david x

Rai15 at 13:08 on 17 August 2004  Report this post
Thank you so very much for your comments, it is always brilliant to get feedback, especially when it is as positive as this.

Thanks again,

-Rai-


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