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Clouds.

by Epona Love 

Posted: 06 August 2004
Word Count: 62


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Clouds.

And so it ends.
What seemed a dream must fade into the night.
The reckoning has come and gone,
There now remains just light.
But darkness will surround the day like shrouds
As nothing can replace
Those silver clouds.
But black,
Black shadows clinging to my heart
Clinging to the day
Stealing sunlight from the sky
As hope must waste away.







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The Walrus at 06:44 on 07 August 2004  Report this post
Wonderful melancholy mirrored in clouds. Simple, but effective.

The Walrus

olebut at 08:49 on 07 August 2004  Report this post
Epona

I am always drawn to poems such as this possibly because I see so much emotion in the imagery that this projects. especially like

Black shadows clinging to my heart
Clinging to the day
Stealing sunlight from the sky
As hope must waste away.

in many ways simple, but very effective

take care

david


LONGJON at 04:24 on 12 August 2004  Report this post
Hi Epona,

A skilfully crafted reflection on loss.

Well done

John P.

Lawrenco at 23:59 on 15 August 2004  Report this post
The poem is certainly I feel emotionally highly charge and has very interesting imagery of our insecurity in loss.
A balanced feel to the poem,nice flow a swift ambience.


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