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Angel`s Hand For You

by Rai15 

Posted: 04 August 2004
Word Count: 41
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There’s a scar
in my heart
but it’s healed for you

There’s a space
in my heart
that’s built for you

There’s a step
in my heart
inside for you

There’s a star
in my heart
it’s always open for you






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roovacrag at 21:54 on 04 August 2004  Report this post
Rai.

There is a place in WW just for you,
your young and beautiful,then thats you.
Your talent goes,second to none.
How many hearts love you like we do?

Good poem.

xx Alice
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olebut at 09:04 on 05 August 2004  Report this post
Rai another good one have another look at verse 3 the last line it seesm a little ugly and out of place perhaps drop the first two words ?

take care

david

ps alice has said it all
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Rai15 at 14:54 on 06 August 2004  Report this post
Alice, what you've said is ever so sweet, and I'm not sure how to thank you enough, it is very much appreciated! :)

David, again, I agree with what you've pointed out - thank you.

Thank you both once again,

-Rai-
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