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Farewell to us

by Bobo 

Posted: 03 August 2004
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Elastoplast for the soul
drips in the stench of you
and your whore-laiden
world of fucking fantasy.
No room for me.

A cannibalised spirit, spit-roasted
to perfection
now feeds your emptiness.

Love and trust
have left the building,
cash in hand.






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Fearless at 19:14 on 03 August 2004  Report this post
Biting, but not digesting.

Fearless
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miffle at 00:11 on 04 August 2004  Report this post
Bobo, a sad sad poem, like a living nightmare I thought. Makes me think of bile... Again a strong piece. Nikki

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NB definitely seems an ironic 'farewell'
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Bobo at 17:51 on 04 August 2004  Report this post
Woz / Nikki - thanks for your comments - purely cathartic, so not worth much stylistically...but cheaper than therapy!!!

BoBo x
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roovacrag at 20:59 on 04 August 2004  Report this post
Bobo very strong piece. First stanza holds power and I can't put my finger on it.

xx Alice
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The Walrus at 08:13 on 06 August 2004  Report this post
Some pretty terryfying imagery here Bobo! It works well though - nice nasty piece.

The Walrus
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