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GALAXY OF LOVE
Posted: 01 August 2004
Word Count: 64
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Let us fly,let us fly to the moon up above,
let us swing round the planets in a galaxy of love,
we will glide past Jupiter,Venus and Mars,
hold out our arms to catch shooting stars.
The universe is yours,take it.
The world is your oyster,taste it.
Slide down the rainbow to the pot of gold,
my love is the treasure of dreams untold.
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 The Walrus at 20:34 on 01 August 2004
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Wow Stan, love the spirit and of this piece. Unadulterated purity of love and passion. There is no substitute.
Red
xx
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roovacrag at 06:52 on 02 August 2004
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Joan,Nikki thank you both for your kind words.
Nikki thanks for spotting typo.
xx Alice
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 Nell at 17:15 on 02 August 2004
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Alice, wonderful images - very exuberant and upbeat. Love swing round the planets in a galaxy of love...
Nell.
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Mooncat at 17:49 on 02 August 2004
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Hi Alice,
Lovely words and images. A sense of being free and at one with the universe.
Best wishes,
Marie
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ShayBoston at 18:59 on 02 August 2004
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Alice,
I think this is fantastic, one of your best. Love the same line as Nell.
I wondered if you needed 'the' in third line. I think it flows better without it.
Shay x
<Added>
Sorry Al, meant fourth line.
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roovacrag at 12:20 on 03 August 2004
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Nell what is love but a galaxy. Like a wind passing through and leaving a star or a gem in your heart.
xx Alice
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roovacrag at 12:22 on 03 August 2004
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Marie, thanks,love is a universe and I want everyone to get it.
xx Alice
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roovacrag at 12:25 on 03 August 2004
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Shay, thanks . Took out ..the and it does sound better. Thank you.
xx Alice
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