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You don`t know what you`ve got til it`s gone
Posted: 26 May 2003
Word Count: 108
Summary: Here's another poem..you are all probably getting bored of them now! But just trying to get some practice in.
Thank you for your time.
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Savour this moment,
It won’t happen again.
Not soon, at least
Take in my smell,
Remember it.
Scent is so powerful
In bringing back a memory
Please hold my hand,
Don’t let it go.
I doubt you will ever feel
Such electricity as you do
Between us now
Capture my heartbeat,
As I pull you close.
Store it inside your mind
Remember
It was beating for you.
Read the story
That my eyes are telling you.
Think of how many times
They have told you I love you,
Just by looking at you,
Not saying a word.
Savour this moment,
It won’t happen again.
Not soon, at least.
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 roger at 21:44 on 26 May 2003
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Well I'm not getting bored Stac....good stuff and so sad, though you do seem to have had a pretty rough love life. Cheer up, love - you'll find Mr Right one day soon.
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olebut at 22:12 on 26 May 2003
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Stacey write away i find poetry releases the emotions , ease the hurt, excites me takes me to new wonderful places and also to dark mysterious ones
you havethe talent and the emotion dont hide either of them that would be a waste and would keep it all bottled up inside you that emotion neds to flow it is your creativity
take care your words agreat thank you for alowing us to share them
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 Stacey at 10:47 on 27 May 2003
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Thank you so much guys! It is so nice to recieve positive feedback. And believe it or not, I am in a great relationship at the moment Rog! Have been for 4 years! It's just until I met this one, everyone before was a shit!(to put it politely). But on the upside, I guess I have them to thank for all of these strong emotions that I am so eager to express!
Thanks again, all the best.
Stace
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olebut at 10:58 on 27 May 2003
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I may have quoted this before Stacey but indirectly it seems relevent
When inventing the light bulb Thomas Eddison viewed every effort to not invent it as a success.
He worked on the principle that he had successfully discovered a way in which it didnt work and thus was one step closer to finding a way that did nice philosophy on life I reckon
take care and good luck
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roger at 13:18 on 27 May 2003
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No wonder we were around for ten thousand years before we got our first light bulb.
And I'm delighted to hear that, Stace....excellent news. I was beginning to worry about you. But just one point - we're not allowed 'shit' (or derivatives of same) on this site; we have to say 'poo' or 'poop'. Just a friendly warning before David gets to hear about it - thank God he's on holiday this week.
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Stacey at 17:25 on 27 May 2003
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Lol! You guys are great! David, what a great philosophy, so relevant. Thank you so much (again) for your words of wisdom.
And Rog, I will be careful to watch my mouth in the future- especially when referring to my 'ex-poo's';0)
Take care both of you,
Stacey.
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llydstp at 01:09 on 31 May 2003
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Stacey
There are some gorgeous things in this. Absolutely loved: "Remember.....it was beating for you." Beautiful.
Steve
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