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CATCHING MOONBEAMS

by roovacrag 

Posted: 28 July 2004
Word Count: 92


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You placed your ring upon my finger,
knowing our love would always linger,
feel your lips close to mine,
loving you till the end of time.

We will have our stormy patches,
catching moonbeams on our lashes,
sailing over several seas
going towards our destiny.

Making love from dusk to dawn,
planting seeds so we would spawn,
part of me,part of you,
who will know what life is new.

We will have a future strong and true,
dancing away to our favourite tune,
open up all heavens wonder
let no-one put asunder






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Ticonderoga at 09:36 on 29 July 2004  Report this post
'catching moonbeams on our lashes' - what an exquisitely beautiful phrase! Nice one, Alice.

Best,

Mike

roovacrag at 16:41 on 29 July 2004  Report this post
Mike glad you liked the line. Wasn't sure it would work.
xx Alice

Lawrenco at 19:03 on 30 July 2004  Report this post
Nice rhythm Alice enjoyable poem.

The Walrus at 22:32 on 01 August 2004  Report this post
Wonderful... the endurance of love... sigh!

The Walrus

gard at 01:34 on 03 August 2004  Report this post
Hi Roova

sweet and romantic, with a nice rhythm and tone

Love the

catching Moonbeams on our lashes


what a lovely image it inspires.

like this almost a song, a folk song maybe

G


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