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Jot

by Rai15 

Posted: 27 July 2004
Word Count: 33
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Describing all my thoughts
with just simple words.
Painting many visions
with adjectives and metaphors.
Sharing a dream with someone
through writing on a page.
Expressing my feelings
when I’ve lost my voice.






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The Walrus at 21:21 on 27 July 2004  Report this post
Interesting piece Rai, the last two lines appear to be a contradiction... or is this the point?

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Account Closed at 11:33 on 28 July 2004  Report this post
Hi Rai,

A little jot that says a lot.
Loved it!
A poet's declaration of his art.
This is spot on.

Ste
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Rai15 at 12:16 on 28 July 2004  Report this post
Heya, thank you both for your comments. The last two lines i wrote because I'm not good with talking about feelings, so i write them down instead.

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