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Tear Fall

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 23 July 2004
Word Count: 38
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Tear fall

There was
tear fall
today.

Yes
the heart
rained
the way
that summer
clouds come
from clear
july blue,

sun sorry
for showing
it's feelings
in front of
the children,

apology
made written
by rainbow.





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Account Closed at 20:37 on 24 July 2004  Report this post
Hi John,

An elemental poem that has left me thinking of rainbows after reading it.

Magical.

Ste
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Lottie at 11:44 on 25 July 2004  Report this post
I enjoyed reading this piece, very beatiful.

Lottie :-)
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Fearless at 20:31 on 25 July 2004  Report this post
Gently perfect.

Fearless
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