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by libera 

Posted: 22 July 2004
Word Count: 65
Summary: Getting over unrequited love

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Words, tears, deep breaths emerge
Pouring out like a hearty commotion.
It is that sudden rush of emotion
When your soul becomes submerged
With that terrible blow.
Just let it all go.

Yes, your love is unrequited
And all hope becomes slighted.
But this is a loverís redemption,
That liberating sensation.
Except for your anxious heart-beat,
And knowing, never again can you meet.

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roovacrag at 15:23 on 22 July 2004  Report this post
Libera..nothing worse than unrequited love. Very painful and nothing you do will make it work.

There is someone waiting in the future. Then all hell is let loose on such passion.

xx Alice

Mooncat at 17:14 on 22 July 2004  Report this post
Libera, you've captured the emotion really well. I'm sure we've all been there.

Like Alice says, there is someone waiting in the future.

Well done,


Account Closed at 09:05 on 26 July 2004  Report this post
Hi Libera,

Beautiful poem and one I could identify with. You've formed your words masterfully in this poem.


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