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Why?

Posted: 18 July 2004
Word Count: 24

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my baby's
gone
my baby's
dead

left alone

why

nature's greed
seizes
nature's greed
torments

i'm alone

why

my baby's
gone
my baby's
dead

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Bobo at 22:18 on 18 July 2004 Report this post

Hi Lottie - a stark piece which conveys well the starkness of painful loss. Powerful and paining to the reader.

BoBo x

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Ticonderoga at 14:50 on 19 July 2004 Report this post

Simple, sad and powerful......

Best,

Mike

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