Login   Sign Up 



 

A Letter for You

by Rai15 

Posted: 17 July 2004
Word Count: 75


Font Size
 


Printable Version
Print Double spaced


With the words I canít find,
I am writing to you,
the voice I have lost,
reeling in my head,
with memories of yesterday.
With the words I canít find,
Iím trying to describe,
evírything I think,
evírything I feel,
by me, your picture on the floor.
With the words I canít find,
I want to make it straight,
simple in my mind,
write it down for you,
in a letter you may not get.






Favourite this work Favourite This Author


Comments by other Members



olebut at 20:28 on 17 July 2004  Report this post
Rai

who hasn't been in this position you capture the emotion extremely well and succinctly

take care

david

Rai15 at 20:03 on 18 July 2004  Report this post
Thank you very much, David,

-Rai-

Bobo at 22:22 on 18 July 2004  Report this post
Rai - simple writing and yet very moving and with intensity. Written with very sincere 'felt' feeling. Like this a lot.

BoBo x

Bobo at 22:22 on 18 July 2004  Report this post
Rai - simple writing and yet very moving and with intensity. Written with very sincere 'felt' feeling. Like this a lot.

BoBo x


To post comments you need to become a member. If you are already a member, please log in .