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Smile

by Rai15 

Posted: 11 July 2004
Word Count: 60


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The thought of a delicate kiss
though a real one would be sweeter
The memory of an old hug
but a new one would be better
The notion of complex comfort
where words could be much simpler
The snapshot of a perfect world
when a portrait could be brighter
The vision of lasting love
although moving picture would be nicer






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roovacrag at 12:19 on 12 July 2004  Report this post
Rai, lovely poem.
Yes better the real from the dreams.
Better to love and be loved than never to love at all.

It's heartfelt when your young.
Deeper when your older and had a grand passion.

Well done.
xx Alice

Rai15 at 12:21 on 12 July 2004  Report this post
Thank you very much, Alice, I did have apprehensions about posted it, but you've reassured me, thanks.

-Rai-

poemsgalore at 18:42 on 13 July 2004  Report this post
This is as close to perfection (for me anyway) as you can get Rai, absolutely, absolute bliss.

Rai15 at 19:03 on 13 July 2004  Report this post
Thank you ever so much, your words mean a lot to me. :)
Again, thanks,

-Rai-


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