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Eco Warrior

by Mikesparks 

Posted: 08 July 2004
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crowspark at 21:53 on 16 July 2004  Report this post
Hi Mark,
I enjoyed reading this. I find reading this kind of "play" format a little uncomfortable as I'm not used to it but I very quickly got into the characters in your piece.
I think the characters work well. I wonder if you need a bit more physical action to enforce the humour? I feel that a few touchs here and there might develop the situations and strengthen the humour.
Really enjoyed it.
Bill
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