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Lift Me Up

by Rai15 

Posted: 07 July 2004
Word Count: 41

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My head is feeling heavy,
cannot hold it up,
lean it on desk,
hands, keyboard,
folded arms, but no
to cry on
No one to hold me,
tell me Iím ok
to wipe away
the tears, and

lift me up

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roovacrag at 18:50 on 07 July 2004  Report this post
Rai.... wish i could lift you up.Wipe away your tears,give you a shoulder to cry on.

This is from the heart and as a mother i feel so heartfelt.

Glad you can bring your feelings out in your poetry.

Well done.


Rai15 at 19:28 on 07 July 2004  Report this post
Thank you very much, Alice, good to know people can identify with the feelings in my poetry. :)


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