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No one Died

by peterxbrown 

Posted: 02 July 2004
Word Count: 165
Summary: Breaking up and starting again poemsong


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Its ironic, and it should be hard to say
It may be bitter, but I'll think it anyway
of all the phases of my life
and every place I've called my own
Its only through this time with you
I've been alone.

CHORUS: A broken heart is an illusion
Noone died through feeling blue
There's no reason why another
Can have power over you
Just believe that you are special
Look those doubters in the eye
They cannot hurt you
So, you'll never have to cry.

I'm not crying,tears are wasted anyway
I may be hurting, but the pain will seap away
I thought the troubles that we knew
and the unhappiness we shared
Would be confronted and rejected
If we cared.

CHORUS

Call me stupid, its time I understood the rules
There's no returning, looking back is just for fools
The road is stretching out ahead
the distant lights are bright and clear
the future beckons with a smile
and you're not there.

CHORUS








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roovacrag at 12:49 on 03 July 2004  Report this post
Peter a great one. Trying to put a tune to this.
Did you have some kind of beat in mind?

I gone from soul,rock,jazz etc.
Typo ,,through 5th line down.

Lousy singer even the dog was howling at my voice.
She no taste for music.

This will make a great song.
Ballad I think....no expert on music.

xxxxxxx Alice


olebut at 18:05 on 03 July 2004  Report this post
Peter

not sure what style but good words

take care

david

Lottie at 11:06 on 05 July 2004  Report this post
I heard it as starting as ballad then chorus speeding it up and making it more catchy.

No Regrets - Robbie Williams style ending when he says "The love we once had is officially DEAD!"

Yes, we've all been there haven't we, good lyrics.

Lottie :-)


peterxbrown at 23:55 on 19 July 2004  Report this post
Thanks droogs you are very kind. I have got a tune. It goes...da de da da da de da de da de .....oh perhaps not!


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