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POETS
Posted: 13 June 2004
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Poets are not people
just a phrase in a book
think God almighty
words that are said.
Dream on a wish,
wish to come true,
do you believe,
I love you?
Never believe in wisdom,
nor believe in power,
just a humble child
lain down to rest.
AMEN.
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 gard at 19:26 on 13 June 2004
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Hi roovacrag
I am perplexed, I am not sure what is lying undeneath this piece. I almost thought of death of a child, maybe death of innocence? Or the fabrications of writeing?
What say you?
G
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roovacrag at 19:46 on 13 June 2004
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GARD,trust you to be the first.
Poets are human beings,not gods.
People seem to think we are different.
We are ,just human beings,doing chores like everyone else.
People who read poetry , and more are doing it,because they enjoy reading it.
It is like reading into a soul of the writer.
You can read a mind and soul in poetry.
xxxAlicejoy
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Account Closed at 20:08 on 13 June 2004
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Hi Alice,
This is an intriguing poem. It felt like a different poem in each stanza, but the rythm linked them together, with a kind of fragmented dreamlike effect. A fascinating poetic illusion.
Ste
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roovacrag at 20:39 on 13 June 2004
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Steven, I was trying to say never believe in words.
A fools dream.
There is a person there,Not what you expect
just a dream.
Your a good writer...how come you are not sending?
XXaLICE
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roovacrag at 23:42 on 13 June 2004
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STEVEN. this an elusion. Trial without error.
Why do women fall in love with poets?
lonely....read too many mills n boon.
Desperate for
man of thier dreams.
Who knows might get one mysel.....doubt it
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gard at 01:10 on 17 June 2004
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Hi Alice
sorry! Didn't mean to be the first.....but I see more clearly now.
G
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