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Pap Razzi

by Mikesparks 

Posted: 11 June 2004
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Account Closed at 09:30 on 12 June 2004  Report this post
Hi Mike,
This is a good start. The humour is gentle but there. The two characters are believable and interesting. How long is it in total? Is it for tv/film?


ADY2004 at 11:28 on 12 June 2004  Report this post
I have to be honest and say you are trying to hard

I think you'd be better off drawing up your own experiences of life and making a contemporary comedy

I have to say it struck me as far too Black Addery, but without the same quality of humour, no offence

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