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Weapons Of Choice

by CrazyPete 

Posted: 02 June 2004
Word Count: 180
Summary: Another experimental piece - more prose than than poetry, but a little of both


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The lines on the six-shooter were sleek and smooth. The dark metal of the gun almost organic in it’s beauty. Its elegance, however, belied its power of destruction. Three score men had died from it’s bullets, ten more maimed or wounded. Each man had fallen victim to a savage poetry in motion: The lonely sonnet of the gunslinger.

It was dormant now, unused for uncounted years. Laying snug in the leather holster that molded itself around the graceful contours of the gun; a gentle lover locked in a permanent embrace.

The gun itself had no thought, no emotion, nor even an awareness of the deadly purpose for which it had been created. And yet it waited. Silently, patiently waiting for that brief moment in time when man and merged into one.

Thought, heartbeat, momentum.

A flash of light, a cloud of smoke.
The sound of a tiny deadly thunderclap.
Time ceases,
A pregnant pause.
Time begins.
A lifeless corpse falls heavily to the ground.
The hero holsters his gun and walks away into the sunset, his job done once more.






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roovacrag at 14:43 on 02 June 2004  Report this post
Reminds me of high noon.
Liked the line....The dark metal of a gun almost organic in its beauty.
Then it could be Valentines day. Many were killed or maimed.
Well done.
xx Alice

andyccn at 18:14 on 02 November 2004  Report this post
Great image of something so deadly.

Just a couple of pointers...

... moment in time when man and * merged into one.

* should there be something else in here?

A lifeless corpse falls heavily to the ground.

Do you need "lifeless" and "heavily"? Just a suggestion you can use or bin:

A corpse falls to the ground.

Excellent work mate. Well done!

Andy


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