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Pentecost

by Lawrenco

Posted: 01 June 2004
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Heavens teardrops,cover, warm ,stone ,slabs.
Misted spirit, born again?
In pentecosts, gassy,whit,spa.

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roovacrag at 05:34 on 02 June 2004 Report this post

So few words,yet so well placed.
Well done.
xx Alice

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gard at 00:27 on 03 June 2004 Report this post

Hi lawrenco

i love the first line 'warm stone slabs'. I am not familiar with pentacost though I looked it up on web and its a christian/judism celebration of gods harvests and men working or something....., still, i do like the phrase in the last line.

G

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Lawrenco at 14:36 on 04 June 2004 Report this post

Many thanks Alice,happy you liked it.

Yes Gina,Pentecost is when Christ Ascension,is mixed with the Holy Spirit,and given back to us.
I have changed the spring with Whit,it is certainly I feel more appropiate

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