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Tomorrow
Posted: 29 May 2004 Word Count: 74
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Once upon a wishing day, in the silent hour, Between the not quite nighttime And the not quite lighttime, In that prickling silence, the heart awakes.
Awakes to a bed of tired sadness, wrapped In the stifling grey of alone, Senses the moment, cold as stone As the ticking, crippling dawn arrives.
Arrives like a thief, commanding attention, Arbeit macht frei Are the words of the day, Round the huts, the fences and chimneys.
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miffle at 10:25 on 30 May 2004
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LJ, loved the last verse here especially. A strong end: though I do not know what the 'words of the day' mean or which language they are in sound alone to me they seem a bit militant, stomp-stomp like (!?). Miffle
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meant 'they are in: in sound alone...'
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spud at 12:35 on 30 May 2004
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LJ
Found this very poignant. Very stark imagery, especially the last stanza - brings concentration camps to mind...am I right?
Spud
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gard at 13:05 on 30 May 2004
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Hi LJ
"Work makes you free" - the iron gate over Auswchitz, the most horrible and hated words written at terminal Hell....
its memorial w/e in the USA with the unveiling of a long-awaited memorial for WWII. Its been big news.
Brilliant LJ!
G
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joanie at 18:07 on 30 May 2004
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LJ, it hardly bears thinking about, does it? But we must keep remembering. Excellent.
joanie
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LONGJON at 20:35 on 30 May 2004
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Hello everyone, and thanks for your comments. Its very easy, I think, for a poem to try to be "worthy" by association - hope that is not the case here.
Absolutely right, Gina, the most sardonic, vicious demonstration of the culpable insanity that was Nazism. I guess the issue is 'could it ever happen again' - what concerns me is the answer is yes.
John P.
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gard at 22:45 on 30 May 2004
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Hi LJ
yes I can see that happening especially with the escalating paranoia that is starting to choke everyone
G
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LONGJON at 02:52 on 31 May 2004
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Hi Spud,
Yes, unfortunately, you certainly are right, Auschwitz.
John P.
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