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Want

by PaulAnthony 

Posted: 28 May 2004
Word Count: 187


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Some write words for pleasure
Some write words for pain
Some breath air for life
Some breath air for gain

Times for some are never easy
Times for some are never hard
Times for all of us counted
Times are marked upon life’s card

We all know when we’re happy
We all know when we’re sad
We all see that life can be cruel
We see the systems mad.

Miss a card for Christmas
Miss the rose that’s grown
Miss the cheat that’s revelled
Miss the greed that’s shown

The life we think we’re living
The life we think we need
The truth about ourselves
The truth of human greed

Life for all is but a premise
Life that tries so hard to be
Life that can’t hide the awful lies
Life that maybe no-one else can see

We all know when we’re happy
We all know when we’re sad
We all know that life can be cruel
We know what makes us mad.

Want for most is something
Want is all we see
Want is something we all want
Want is all I hate in me.







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roovacrag at 14:31 on 28 May 2004  Report this post
OOO
lIKED THIS ONE
Yes i saw what you was writing.
SOME..TIMES..WE.. MISS..THE..LIFE..WE ..WANT.
W ell written and very good. At first i thought you are just repeating till i put it together.
Like your style.
Well done.
XX Alice

PaulAnthony at 14:33 on 28 May 2004  Report this post
Thanks Alice. Appreciate your positivity.

Fearless at 17:44 on 28 May 2004  Report this post
PaulAnthony

Your profile reads 'Amateur writer looking to lose the amateur tag'; on reading this, I would wager that perhaps the tag has already fallen off. The style of presentation is effective, but that's not to detract at all from the substance of your words - the flower of your expression, as it were.

Write more, write on,

Fearless

PaulAnthony at 18:29 on 28 May 2004  Report this post
Fearless thank you, I am humbled by your kind words.

gard at 20:52 on 31 May 2004  Report this post
Hi PA

nice piece well put together with the quirk on the downward read left hand side ..sort of like a stretched out acrostic.

G

PaulAnthony at 10:54 on 01 June 2004  Report this post
Thank you Gard. Appreciate your time.


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