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Too Many Broken Promises

by llydstp 

Posted: 13 May 2003
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She's heard them all before you know
your words
she thinks you kissed The Blarney Stone
when youth was on your brow
your eloquence means little now






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roger at 10:01 on 29 May 2003  Report this post
Steve, I must have missed this first time around. It's very sad, isn't it. It's also very good. But from you, that's not at all unusual.
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olebut at 10:23 on 29 May 2003  Report this post
i like this it is simple but say so much
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llydstp at 12:47 on 29 May 2003  Report this post
Thanks to both of you. Roger, you are still being TOO kind.
Steve
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roger at 12:55 on 29 May 2003  Report this post
Shut up Steve, my reputation's already in tatters, as you'll see if you pop into the humour group!
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