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Missing You

by Rai15 

Posted: 16 May 2004
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As I stand up here, in front
of row upon row of nameless faces
staring out
in search of someone special

Missing you
I just keep smiling on
knowing if anything had been different
I would never have met you

My life would not have changed
I wouldn’t be so happy, and
I wouldn’t be so open
even though I miss you so

However far we part
I want to stay in touch
because I owe so much to you
and couldn’t bear to lose you






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joanie at 16:59 on 16 May 2004  Report this post
I know the feelings in this exactly. Lovely, Rai; well expressed.
typo: 'lose'
joanie
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Rai15 at 19:33 on 16 May 2004  Report this post
Thank you so much :), non-dark poetry is kind of a new field for me so I'm glad I can do it. Cheers for the typo, i do have a tendency not to check these things, oops.
Thanks,

-rai-
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Nell at 07:41 on 17 May 2004  Report this post
Rai, love this gently joyful side of your poetry, feelings beautifully expressed, your work lately is like an awakening. Write on,

Nell.
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The Walrus at 09:20 on 17 May 2004  Report this post
Delighted to see the flip-side Rai :-) - look forward to reading more in this vein (sp?).

The Walrus
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Rai15 at 11:47 on 18 May 2004  Report this post
Thank you both, this type of work has a more positive effect of myself as well, so there'll probably be more.

-Rai-
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