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Haiku

by Seahorse 

Posted: 03 May 2004
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Nudist beach -
at low tide,
a seal






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gard at 23:05 on 03 May 2004  Report this post
hi seahorse nice little haiku!

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spud at 09:16 on 04 May 2004  Report this post
Wow Seahorse

Less is definitely more as far as this lovely piece of writing is concerned. Loved the humour and the image of the seal - so much more appealing than some of the other creatures found on a nudist beach.

cheers

Spud
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miffle at 16:34 on 05 May 2004  Report this post
Seahorse, made me smile... who said you could ever claim a beach belongs to you anyway...! And is that a naked human rather rotund or in fact a cheeky seal... who knows... Liked it, Write on, Miffle
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EmiliaDG at 09:38 on 06 August 2004  Report this post
I enjoyed this Haiku very much. Off in serach of moreof your haikus! Keep it up.
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