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WHAT IS LIFE?

by roovacrag 

Posted: 21 April 2004
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Twas a Monday morning
all was quiet,i claim.
Only the birds singing,
that is just the same.

Why this forboding
what am i to do,
can i shout out for help
what shall i?not a clue.

What do i want from life?
can anyone tell me,
just a shadow of what might have been,
thats not life,its true.






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joanie at 21:25 on 21 April 2004  Report this post
Alice - was it just that Monday morning feeling?? I don't think so! We all have phases when we wonder where on earth we are going and what we want/need. Somtimes you just can't explain it.
joanie
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roovacrag at 21:41 on 21 April 2004  Report this post
It's been one of those weeks. Even a friend wondered what is wrong.
Funny how people on here know my mood and pick up on it.

Might throw my paintings out and just stick to poetry.
just joking.
You cheered me up.
Thanks joanxx
xxxx Alice
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joanie at 21:51 on 21 April 2004  Report this post
Alice - very interesting.......... I'm not 'joanie' really - that's just my anonimity. I am 'Joan'. Funny you should instinctively call me that!
joanie(!)
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roovacrag at 22:02 on 21 April 2004  Report this post
mmmm always saw you as joan.
poets minds the same.
xx Al
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joanie at 22:03 on 21 April 2004  Report this post
Brilliant!!
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Bee at 13:28 on 22 April 2004  Report this post
Know that feeling. Sometimes wish I could have my whole life mapped out for me, so I know what's coming up and where I'm going.
Nice one.
Grazie
Bee!
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roovacrag at 17:58 on 22 April 2004  Report this post
Bee,
wish someone would shape my life for me.
Thanks.
xxAlice
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Mooncat at 09:15 on 18 May 2004  Report this post
Hi Alice,
I liked this. You've captured how I feel almost every day. I agree, poets minds are the same - most poets, anyway. I'd say most writers too.

Best wishes,
Mooncat
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