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Haikuku

by Seahorse 

Posted: 14 April 2004
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Kajagoogoo -
the Christmas disco
dancefloor empties






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joanie at 20:04 on 14 April 2004  Report this post
As soon as I read the title, I thought of Waikiki, so much so that I searched on the internet and found,
"From a height of thirty stories, watch the parade of colors that is Waikiki by day, or revel in the radiance of Waikiki by night."
(webcam)
I think it fits, somehow.....
joanie
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scottwil at 04:22 on 15 April 2004  Report this post
Brilliant.
Made me.
Laugh.
A lot.

Best
Sion
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Anna Reynolds at 15:14 on 15 April 2004  Report this post
Perfectly sums up a time and place and for those of us who are the right age to appreciate it, makes one blush.. Kajagoogoo is a word just made for haiku isn't it?
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gard at 21:37 on 21 April 2004  Report this post
made me laugh too!
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Seahorse at 22:22 on 21 April 2004  Report this post
Thanks for all your comments.
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EmiliaDG at 09:41 on 06 August 2004  Report this post
Fantastic! Though I remember days when the dancefloor filled when Kajagoogoo came on so I must be getting old! You certainly have a way with haiku - terrific simplicity, a good central situation and great wit which i think is often the key to a good haiku.
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