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Kew
Posted: 10 April 2004
Word Count: 27
Summary: Dedicated to two people I love
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A walk in the gardens,
going around Kew.
Orchids,
roses,
reds
all a bloom.
When can I say
three magical words
to my Sunflower?
I love you.
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 Ling Ling at 20:45 on 10 April 2004
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I loved the simplicity of this piece, says it all! If only everything in life were that simple, needless to say it should be! Love Ling Ling x
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miffle at 17:01 on 11 April 2004
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Alice, a florist's delight! A poem about a place that is dear to you tickling free thoughts of two people who are also dear to you. We all experience this - yes, places are perceived differently by each individual... Write on, Miffle
A thought: puzzled by your last stanza (?). Are you asking for permission to say 'I love you'?! Also wondered why (given your dedication) your Sunflower is just one not two OR a Sunflower and another flower?
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The Walrus at 19:08 on 11 April 2004
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Like Ling Ling, I loved the simplicity of this piece. Words are wonderful, but sometimes a few can can convey so much more than many, and occasionally, none at all, a whole universe.
Beautiful piece Stan.
The Walrus
xx
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roovacrag at 15:48 on 12 April 2004
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Thank you all for your comments.
Easy to write about people you love.
Like looking at a carnation and remember your only love.
Or a Begonia that the dog thought it tasted better than it looked.
Thank you.
xx Alice
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