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Scent of Dream

by The Walrus 

Posted: 06 April 2004
Word Count: 111


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A welcome moment…


When daylight hours
- crammed with cerebral somersaults,
verbal hopscotch
and discipline-driven pursuits -
yield to the nocturnal guardian
who topples the muscle-bound mind
from its testosterone throne,
uncoiling its tautness
unclenching its grip
allowing the blissful slip
into the sumptuousness softness
of velvet unconsciousness.

When drifting into
somnolent sensation
we witness the celluloid vista
of angels dancing on tip toe,
when sinking into body texture
brings scent of dream
that sweet syrupy sharpness
of balsamic space.

When submitting to gravitational pull
we relieve the yen
to impale one’s face
through the meniscus of
cognizant reality
to be free
to gladly roam
the hallowed land
of Shangri-la.






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Fearless at 11:14 on 06 April 2004  Report this post
...a welcome moment indeed. I love the dreamy descriptions of release of the Self to slumber. Second stanza did it for me. Write on, fearless x

roovacrag at 15:31 on 06 April 2004  Report this post
Beautiful.
lasting dream,waking hour.

Last stanza did it for me.
Like the awakening hour.

Well done as always red daughter.
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poemsgalore at 19:19 on 06 April 2004  Report this post
Wonderful use of words, each one seems to lead naturally to the next. That must have taken a heck of a lot of work to do.

Sue H at 19:19 on 06 April 2004  Report this post
You are jolly clever! Velvet unconsciousness - I love it!
Sue

The Walrus at 20:31 on 06 April 2004  Report this post
Thanks guys,

Fearless, yes it is a beautiful moment, that moment of release.

Stan, thank you for your unwavering support.

Kathleen, 'heck of a lot of work to do'?, maybe, maybe not. Writing is intense, the genre of poetry probably more so. It is afterall relative. I thank you.

Sue, no more so than the next man. Glad you enjoyed it.

The Walrus

Ling Ling at 09:05 on 07 April 2004  Report this post
What a highly imaginitive piece, the imagery is so colourful, and this flow's beautifully. It almost makes me want to sit at my desk, and ignore the phone and drift off! It's that moment when we let go of the craziness of the day, and give in the the serenity that lies in the sweetest slumber.
Love it!
Ling Ling x

The Walrus at 10:56 on 07 April 2004  Report this post
Thanks Ling Ling.

The Walrus
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