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bittersweet

by Rai15 

Posted: 31 March 2004
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Twitchy child
little smile
ocean teardrops
in a vial






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joanie at 18:42 on 31 March 2004  Report this post
This has to be a girl! I know just what you mean! Always oceans of teardrops!! (Did you mean 'vial'?)
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Nell at 20:03 on 31 March 2004  Report this post
Hi Rai, the little smile makes it happy in spite of the tears. Tender somehow.

Nell.
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Rai15 at 14:30 on 01 April 2004  Report this post
Yes, joanie, I did mean vial - i'll change it, I did do it whilst half "off with the fairies".
Thanks to you both!

-Rai-
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