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NIT NURSE

by roovacrag 

Posted: 15 March 2004
Word Count: 90
Summary: Older generation will know about this. Shirly temple has a lot to answer for.


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Friday night wur nit night
head bent low
tugging at my hair
with a fine tooth comb.

Crying out
"aww mam, aint got nits"
"keep thee head down
for i'll gi thee a clip"

She tugged, she pulled,
then douced with suleo, drenched
for another hour
I stunk like hell.

Washed in soft soap
no shampoo then
hair in rags
Ringlets instead.

Still I complained
aint got no nits
"another word
and flea in't ear"

Sit and wonder
which is worse
nits in the head
or fleas in the ears.







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olebut at 11:25 on 16 March 2004  Report this post
Alice

fortunatley I never wentthrough this although I recall Kids at school who did

'Nitty Norah' The Nit Nurse

very funny
take care

david



The Walrus at 13:50 on 16 March 2004  Report this post
Funny how certain memories come flooding back. A vivid snapshot Stan. Love the dialogue, so natural, so well captured.

The Walrus
xx

Fearless at 13:58 on 16 March 2004  Report this post
I identified with this Al, as I went bald in protest and also hate Shirley Temple.

Hairless

roovacrag at 15:19 on 16 March 2004  Report this post
Thank you for the comments.
Nitty Nora only did girls as their hair was so long.
Mum made doubly sure, my brother never got the ritual.
xx Alice

igbit33 at 16:35 on 16 March 2004  Report this post
Oh, and didn't it smell! thank you for that memory, Al!! Loved the dialogue in it.

Ig. xx

poemsgalore at 18:26 on 16 March 2004  Report this post
this bought back so many memories Alice, especially the 'rags' and ringlets. Not only did I suffer the indignity of the nit nurse, mum was obsessed with cleanliness and went through my hair with a toothcomb twice a week - and the smell of that Suleo yuk!

miffle at 10:51 on 17 March 2004  Report this post
Alice, loved the last verse. Reminded me of the way that children can interpret phrases so literally and yes, you certainly have a point! Don't remember 'Suleo' but do remember 'nit nurse horror' in primary school - and they always said it was nothing shameful (!?) i.e that 'nits only chose clean hair' !? Was that true!? Dialogue brings it to life in time, place and character. Well done, Miffle ;-)

suva at 17:25 on 17 March 2004  Report this post
Alice,
This is a good piece - reads well (and all too true).


She tugged, she pulled,
then douced with suleo, drenched
for another hour
I stunk like hell.

- This is my favourite bit although I really like your use of the vernacular, you manage to capture the young voice well.

Cheers
Susan
xx



PS: My hair is naturally red and curly by the way and my mother hated Shirley Temple so much that I wore a shaven head for most of my early years!



Lawrenco at 00:10 on 20 March 2004  Report this post
My Daughter was a victim of nits .she has very curly hair .It`s still an unpleasant reality luckily she hasn`t had any for ages.
I loved the yorkshire accent ,and purposeful phonetic text.The terror reminds me of Ridley Walker by Russell Hoban,and the humour Stanley Holloway.

pauls at 16:03 on 21 March 2004  Report this post
Hi Alice,
This is funny to a degree, and then I feel sorry for the poor soul.
Well told!

Take care,
Paul



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