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Tips For Teens III

by Seahorse 

Posted: 05 March 2004
Word Count: 11
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If it were true
You'd be blind by now
Wouldn't you






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Fearless at 17:45 on 05 March 2004  Report this post
....yes, but if I had been smart, I would have invested in Kleenex, Vaseline shares and any company making braille keyboards.

Sounds like the sort of things one of my old teachers used to say (before he got nicked).

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Skeetr at 19:32 on 05 March 2004  Report this post

"Is this poem available in Braille?"

Nice one,
Smith
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tinyclanger at 19:33 on 05 March 2004  Report this post
Giggling so much my glasses fell off....
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tc
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Richardwest at 19:39 on 05 March 2004  Report this post
I'll have to re-read this when my vision improves.

Wondrous, Seahorse. And in just eleven words??????

Richard
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roovacrag at 20:49 on 05 March 2004  Report this post
Huh?
Will have to wear the glasses for this.
Sorry trash poem.
Doubt it was one.
xx Alice

<Added>

Don't take offence.
Will still look at the rest you write.xxxxxxxx
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miffle at 10:32 on 06 March 2004  Report this post
Fun poem. Like the directness of it. Could imagine a stern Dad / teacher figure speaking it. 'it' hmmm...yes I think that's the little, yet key word, here. Write on, miffle
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olebut at 12:01 on 06 March 2004  Report this post
i have no idea what this is about



if it were true
this would be in braille
for you
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Account Closed at 18:32 on 06 March 2004  Report this post
Loved it - perfect! What more can I say?!!

Anne B
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EmiliaDG at 09:45 on 06 August 2004  Report this post
Brilliant!
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Account Closed at 17:42 on 06 November 2010  Report this post
Made me laugh out loud. Excellent.
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