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by Rai15 

Posted: 01 March 2004
Word Count: 62


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Painful noises
of a memory
are pounding
in the skull

Light burns a neon world
into eyes,
can’t sleep at night

Paranoia groping at
a sick mind
Shadow people standing
at the foot of the bed

Sat in the shower
crying her eyes out
Wash it all away

Rainbow eyes and
forever shuddering
a life anger can’t solve
but it doesn’t stop






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roovacrag at 14:17 on 01 March 2004  Report this post
Great poem Rai.
You astound me with your words.
Rainbow eyes forever shuddering.
Great line.
xx Alice

Rai15 at 19:26 on 01 March 2004  Report this post
I wrote this the same day as "A Pink Sky..." and it was a toss-up which one got posted first.

Thank you for your comment, always interests me what people think. Much love...

-Rai-


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