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The Message

by dharker 

Posted: 25 May 2025
Word Count: 385
Summary: My take on my prompt 846


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The forester stood at the edge of the clearing, his hand resting gently on the trunk of an ancient oak. The pain in his knees, a stubborn ache borne of years spent traversing rugged terrain, reminded him that time was as unforgiving as the wild itself. Yet, here he was, in this remote locale, a place where the whispering trees seemed to carry secrets from another realm.

In the centre of the clearing, a peculiar device stood on a weathered wooden pedestal. It was an old telegraph machine, its brass fittings glinting faintly in the dappled sunlight. The machine had been featured in local legends as a mystical contraption that spoke not with words, but with the rhythmic tapping of nature’s code. Many doubted its existence, but the forester had always been a seeker of truth, following obscure trails others deemed unworthy of pursuit.
He adjusted his worn hat and stepped to the front of the machine. As his fingers hovered over its aged keys, his mind churned with curiosity. What messages might this contraption hold? The air around him felt heavy, almost expectant, as though the forest itself awaited his next move.

The first tap was tentative, a single note punctuating the silence. Then came another, and another, until the machine hummed with a rhythm that seemed to mimic the heartbeat of the woods. He deciphered the code slowly, his years of solitude having made him adept at hearing the language of the land.

The message was simple yet profound: "Helpful hands create harmony." It resonated with the forester, who had spent his life ensuring the balance between nature and human encroachment. In that moment, the pain in his knees seemed to dull, replaced by a renewed sense of purpose.

The forest, it appeared, had chosen him as its messenger. He vowed to carry this wisdom beyond the shaded canopies, to the towns and villages where people might yet learn to live in unity with the earth.

With a final glance at the telegraph, he turned back toward the path, his hand brushing against the sturdy trunk of the oak once more. The forester knew his task would not be easy, but he also understood that in this helpful locale, where time and nature intertwined, the seeds of harmony had already begun to sprout.






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michwo at 07:22 on 26 May 2025  Report this post
Hope springs eternal in the human breast? You've used all seven of your words, David, and written a piece that reads like a veritable eulogy to optimism!

euclid at 16:41 on 27 May 2025  Report this post
Fantastic and fanciful!
Reads like the first page of an epic saga.
Definitely could be extended.

JJ

michwo at 23:49 on 27 May 2025  Report this post
Coming back to this piece, David, I've noticed you've omitted the word 'featured' from your story and that your list was eight words long rather than seven. This is no big deal, of course, as you've used 3 more than the minimum suggested 4 but 'featured', at a pinch, could be inserted in the first sentence of your second paragraph here. Instead of writing In the centre of the clearing, a peculiar device stood on a weathered wooden pedestal you could write The centre of the clearing featured a peculiar device stood on a weathered wooden pedestal.

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Just a suggestion, obviously.

dharker at 16:28 on 28 May 2025  Report this post
Thanks Michael! I took another look and found I'd used featured in the 3rd sentence of paragraph 2

The machine had been featured in local legends




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