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CONFUSED!

by roger

Posted: 16 July 2024
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Yesterday insists that today’s in fact tomorrow
But tomorrow never comes, as we all know
And today is yesterday from tomorrow’s point of view
So we seem at odds - where did poor today go?
If tomorrow never comes its opinion must be void
As is yesterdays because it’s gone I fear
And surely that must mean that today cannot exist
So what the fuck are we all doing here?

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crowspark at 19:12 on 20 July 2024 Report this post

Hi Roger.
Loved this! I got sucked into your poems internal logic and enjoyed the ride.
What indeed lol.

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michwo at 19:31 on 20 July 2024 Report this post

Today is the tomorrow you worried about yesterday, so why worry if, as you say here, today cannot exist?
We're all living in a vacuum, Roger, or are we...? Thought-provoking! Thanks for submitting.

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roger at 07:50 on 21 July 2024 Report this post

Thanks, Guys, your comments are much appreciated. I love ‘internal logic’ crowspark, it addles your brain, and ownership of an addled brain stops you worrying and makes you happy.

‘Thought provoking’ Bazz? So are you saying that what I said wasn’t actually true?

Thanks again.

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Thanks, Guys, your comments are much appreciated. I love ‘internal logic’ crowspark, it addles your brain, and ownership of an addled brain stops you worrying and makes you happy.

‘Thought provoking’ Michwo? So are you saying that what I said wasn’t actually true?

Thanks again.

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roger at 07:55 on 21 July 2024 Report this post

Sorry, Michwo, I called you Bazz - I was 'CONFUSED'