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Star gazing.

by Lawrenco 

Posted: 26 February 2004
Word Count: 21
Summary: observational.
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Today I went star gazing.
I found one in a grid!

"Gold star!"

Held up and saved!
By a spiders web.






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Fearless at 08:51 on 27 February 2004  Report this post
It's always a treat for me to read one of your lyrics. As usual, you haven't disappointed me. Thanks,

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roovacrag at 21:05 on 27 February 2004  Report this post
So few words but each one was perfect. Wonder how many look at the perfection of a web, before dusting it away.
How many look at the stars at night.
I do as i see with artist eye the beauty.
good one.
xxAlice
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Account Closed at 22:08 on 03 March 2004  Report this post
I love the breathtaking leaps between ideas here - certainly made me think!

Anne B
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Seahorse at 17:36 on 04 March 2004  Report this post
Different. Made me stop and read it again. Made me think.
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Lawrenco at 13:27 on 24 March 2004  Report this post
many thanks for comment very late in the day for me to reply!It was just after Christmas I saw a gold star in a gratting .H aving conversations with other people,they found friends had been sending stars through the post,in cards so thats how it all came about.
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