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The Rosebud Egg

by Jojovits1 

Posted: 04 April 2021
Word Count: 89
Summary: This was the first Faberge egg that Nicholas presented to Alexandra and it was to welcome her to the monarchy after Nicholas ascended the throne. There were some surprises inside - a yellow rose bud (yellow roses were the most valued in Germany) which held a diamond crown and a pendant.


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He offered his world
encased in white gold
and cloudy agate.
Her Germanic
yellow rose
nestled secretly
by a diamond crown
as if to show her
how she could fit.
 
Her doubts were
 well founded.
She was not this
crafted perfection.
Where others saw
coldness and cracks
he held her love
with the
fragile obsession
of an heirloom.
 
The dreamy glamour
faded then snuffed.
From the beauty of
Imperial eggs
to the sorrow
of Ipatiev House
he still gazed
and saw only her
as finally
her face
blocked the sun






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crowspark at 11:42 on 04 April 2021  Report this post
The Rosebud egg is a great focus for your poem of wealth and final tragedy.
Great opening stanza, second suggests a rift between the gift and reality (although I don't know anything about their relationship) but the idealism of the rosebud nestled beneath the Csar and then cradled with a crown kinda sets it all up.

Love the segway from

The dreamy glamour
faded then snuffed.
From the beauty of
Imperial eggs
to the sorrow
of Ipatiev House


To the comunist prison known as The House of Special Purpose.

Love the ending


saw only her
as finally
her face
blocked the sun

Lovely poem.
 

michwo at 15:51 on 04 April 2021  Report this post
I can only really echo Bill's comments, Jo-Ann. Lovely poem and well balanced too.
I think Boris Yeltsin later conedemned the murder of the last Romanove in Yeketerinburg as one of the worst crimes ever committed in Russian history.. I can't help but think that Stalin probably had worse ones on his conscience, but did he have a conscience? Probably not. George V wouldn't help Nicholas and Alexandra in World War I because of Alexandra's German antecedents as Allix of Hesse when she married Tsar Nicholas II in 1884.

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PS. Sorry for the typos. I really have to depend on a magnifying glass these days.
conedmened = condemned
Romanove = Romanovs
Yeketerinburg = Yekaterinburg

V`yonne at 14:53 on 05 April 2021  Report this post
A lovely poem indeed. It's beautiful description adds to the poignant ending. 


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