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Magic Exists

by Jojovits1 

Posted: 31 October 2020
Word Count: 70
Summary: For this week’s prompt and a lot more practical than my usual Halloween shenanigans. With another lockdown looming, I take peace from the little things and the comfortable things. For me, that’s magic.


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Magic exists.

The pixie dust
disintegrates
Into adulthood.

The promise
of happy ever after
dies with each
application for
Universal Credit.

Every redundancy,
a fairy’s tear.
Rumplestiltskin
spinning loneliness 
around the shielding.

Yet, magic exists.

My mother, alive
in my niece’s smile.
Trees,
showering leaves
like blessings.

Every step apart
brings us closer
in heart.
As if
this is how
it should be.

Cruel as it seems
magic exists.



 






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crowspark at 12:18 on 01 November 2020  Report this post
Hi Jo-ann

I love the pathos in your poem. Magic exists but:

The pixie dust
disintegrates
Into adulthood.


The brutal every day harshness of:

The promise
of happy ever after
dies with each
application for
Universal Credit.


Terrific image (and leading us back to the land of fairy and magic):

Every redundancy,
a fairy’s tear.
Rumplestiltskin
spinning loneliness
around the shielding.


Leads to your pivotal line, yet magic exists.

The blessings of nature, new life and renewal.

Love

Every step apart
brings us closer
in heart.
As if
this is how
it should be.


An excellent entry for the magic challenge. Thanks for sharing.

Jojovits1 at 12:39 on 01 November 2020  Report this post
Thanks Bill!

Back soon with this week’s challenge:-)

V`yonne at 14:35 on 01 November 2020  Report this post
broken heart Oh I think BwS might like this one too. A very moving poem, Jo and I love your idea of 'magic'. It's wonderful in every line.

And


Rumplestiltskin
spinning loneliness 
around the shielding.

packs a punch!

Jojovits1 at 15:00 on 01 November 2020  Report this post
Thanks Oonah.  I'll run it past them smileyx


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