Login   Sign Up 



 
Archive » BorderBound » Work
Archive »  Poetry » General » Work

they fed me hate

by BorderBound 

Posted: 20 February 2004
Word Count: 52
Summary: This is about how poeple will unjustice you day after day and you will think in your head, "i'll never forgive them, NOTHING they can do will let me forgive them..." and you forget, that they dont really care, they're not even thinking about it.
Font Size
 


Printable Version
Print Double spaced


What black soul
Black rose
What hate so deep
Makes all this evil
Justified.

What sleep they loose
Or nights they weep
Words they take back
Or prayers they have for me
Allow forgiveness?

And what point is made?
For they haven’t even apologised
Well, of course not,
They’ve done nothing wrong.







Favourite this work Favourite This Author


Comments by other Members



Rai15 at 17:30 on 20 February 2004  Report this post
I can relate to this really well, as I see it everyday, I think you've really put across your point very well. Well done :)

-Rai-
Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

The Walrus at 21:21 on 20 February 2004  Report this post
Understand your feeling of outrage, of disbelief. But is it worthy of attention, energy?

Undoubtedly a well conveyed message.

'Follow the day and reach for the sun'. (Polyphonic Spree)

The Walrus
Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

Sparrow_splitter at 02:08 on 22 February 2004  Report this post
I thought this was great. People really make me sick.

Sparrow
Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)


To post comments you need to become a member. If you are already a member, please log in .

 






Other work by BorderBound:      ...view all work by BorderBound